http://fjrwrites.com/2010/03/while-the-city-softly-weeps/ Thu, 26 Jan 2012 01:56:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://fjrwrites.com/2010/03/while-the-city-softly-weeps/comment-page-1/#comment-302 Tyra Sequeira Tue, 09 Mar 2010 00:33:38 +0000 http://fjrwrites.com/?p=535#comment-302 Deep thoughts are so difficult to describe but its done so well in this poem. Beautiful choice of words and the rhymes were effective. I love the lines about the clock and time itself its my favorite verse. "Wish I may, wish I might – nay not tonight." I have to say that is extremely creative. This was so artistic. I loved it. Deep thoughts are so difficult to describe but its done so well in this poem. Beautiful choice of words and the rhymes were effective. I love the lines about the clock and time itself its my favorite verse. “Wish I may, wish I might – nay not tonight.” I have to say that is extremely creative. This was so artistic. I loved it.

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