http://fjrwrites.com/2010/02/let-me-help/ Thu, 26 Jan 2012 01:56:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://fjrwrites.com/2010/02/let-me-help/comment-page-1/#comment-291 Dante Mottillo Thu, 25 Feb 2010 02:34:47 +0000 http://fjrwrites.com/?p=486#comment-291 thanks. I just want to state that I embelished on some comments people have said about my writing. That's primarily where my inspiration originated from. My regards thoguh for how i read it in class. Sorry, but I was kind of nervous. ya, thanks again, I was trying to extract the fact that many people joke about some serious topics. They think that every kid that dresses in blakc is emo, and that every kid that's smarter, or has a peculiar taste in books or music is just weird. Anyway, thanks for the comments, and I plan on combining it with a few of my other poems for the A.H. presentation. Can't wait, and keep posting everyone. thanks. I just want to state that I embelished on some comments people have said about my writing. That’s primarily where my inspiration originated from. My regards thoguh for how i read it in class. Sorry, but I was kind of nervous. ya, thanks again, I was trying to extract the fact that many people joke about some serious topics. They think that every kid that dresses in blakc is emo, and that every kid that’s smarter, or has a peculiar taste in books or music is just weird. Anyway, thanks for the comments, and I plan on combining it with a few of my other poems for the A.H. presentation. Can’t wait, and keep posting everyone.

]]> http://fjrwrites.com/2010/02/let-me-help/comment-page-1/#comment-290 Jaime Redford Thu, 25 Feb 2010 01:37:45 +0000 http://fjrwrites.com/?p=486#comment-290 I absolutely LOVE this poem, and it was very impressive how you read it at the poetry workshop today! I like how you talk about the ignorant accusations that circulate: "emo, stalker, wierdo" and how people are so fixated with pinning these labels on (you) when you can see these things in reality but it really isn't funny at all. And i also enjoy the recurring reference to the goggles that cloud people's vision, it's very effective. great ending as well I absolutely LOVE this poem, and it was very impressive how you read it at the poetry workshop today! I like how you talk about the ignorant accusations that circulate: “emo, stalker, wierdo” and how people are so fixated with pinning these labels on (you) when you can see these things in reality but it really isn’t funny at all. And i also enjoy the recurring reference to the goggles that cloud people’s vision, it’s very effective. great ending as well

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